Poetry is the gateway to the soul … not!

This was a reply to someone who asked the general public for a love poem


Tiger, tiger, burning bright, I’ve got butterflies in my tummy, Pitiful, how pitiful, is my plight, I’ve got the tongue of a mummy.

Oh what limpid pools — her eyes, And her hair smells a little like litchi, My head, oh gods, it’s full of mice, Not all is well and peachy.

Today, I must, I can, I will, Lay bare to her my 130/90 heart, Will she say I fit the bill? Or just call me a boring fart?

Here she is, I will, I must, Unveil my true love true, My love for me, my love or bust, I hope she says “I do”.

‘Tis done, at last, ’tis said, I admitted and self-consciously laughed, She smiled and said, “Oh, dear, sweet Ted, Don’t be daft.”

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5 Comments

  1. Anonymous
    Posted March 16, 2007 at 8:34 pm | Permalink

    I spy with my little eye– inspiration from William Blake’s “The Tyger” :P

                  ~ Nirbheek
    

  2. Anonymous
    Posted March 16, 2007 at 8:36 pm | Permalink

    Also, “Or just call me a boring fart?” should be “Or just call me a boring Ol’ Fart?” =P

    ~Nirbheek

  3. louiswu
    Posted March 17, 2007 at 4:32 am | Permalink

    Away, with your puerile ways, brat!

  4. fugney
    Posted March 17, 2007 at 7:50 am | Permalink

    Heh.

  5. steila
    Posted March 19, 2007 at 4:53 am | Permalink

    Charming!!

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